If It Sounds Like Writing, I Rewrite

Not Dreams But Night Changes, Not Destiny But Path Changes, Always Keep Your Hopes Alive, Luck May Or May Not Change, But Time Definitely Chages.

If Work Was A Good Thing, The Rich Would Have It All And Not Let You Do It.

All The Information You Need Can Be Given In Dialogue.

Never Use A Verb Other Than "said" To Carry Dialogue... I Once Noticed Mary Mccarthy Ending A Line Of Dialogue With "she Asseverated" And Had To Stop Reading And Go To The Dictionary.

There Are 500 Million People On Facebook, But What Are They Saying To Each Other? Not Much.